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It is a great apportunity to study. We’ve a good program from the school in the U.S. After military service, I think it would help me step further to reach my goal.

I’d like to speak english fluently three years ago, I visited my cousine. I realized that I could communicate to canadians only with body language. I was disapointed with myself. In order to speak english well to reach my goal, which is living internationaly without any obstacles. I’ll attech a great importance to the basic foundation for my english skill fron the ELI program. I heard the ELI program from this school os tough, however, I’ll work hard do my best for my family for my goal. Through the ELI program I’ll learn english to go to University. And also

have a great chance to learn the western culture to have a broader mind and to be creative I could live internationaly so that I would have more opportunities whereever I go to. Therefore I’ll try my best to won english, enjoy my life and if I have a chance I’ll do the volunteer work for my experience. I hope it could be great journey and experience for my life.

 

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First of all, I am grateful that I got an opportunity to study in Georgia Southwestern University. I think studying in Georgia Southwestern University will help me to step further to reach my goals.

My first goal is to speak English fluently. Three years ago, I once visited my cousin in Canada. Then I realized that I could communicate with Canadians only with body language. I was disappointed with myself and I decided to study hard to be good at English. I want to speak English well and be able to live internationally without any language obstacles. I will study hard and follow the rules in the ELI program. I heard the ELI program can be tough but I will do my best to work through all the difficulties. I want to learn many English skills from the ELI program to successfully get into a University in America.

I believe this will be a great chance for me to learn not only the language but also the western culture. And this will help me to have a broader mind and be more creative. Therefore, I will try my best in studying, making new friends, and making unforgettable memories. I hope this could be a great journey and an excellent experience for my life. Thank you.

 

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Study Plan

 

First of all, I am grateful that I got an opportunity to study in Georgia Southwestern University. I think studying in Georgia Southwestern University will help me to step further to reach my goals.

 

My first goal is to speak English fluently. Three years ago, I once visited my cousin in Canada. Then I realized that I could communicate with Canadians only with body language. I was disappointed with myself and I decided to study hard to be good at English. I want to speak English well and be able to live internationally without any language obstacles. I will study hard and follow the rules in the ELI program. I heard the ELI program can be tough but I will do my best to work through all the difficulties. I want to learn many English skills from the ELI program to successfully get into a University in America.

 

Since when I was a little boy, I really liked sports. I have been to many soccer, baseball, and basketball games and enjoyed playing sports with my friends. I can not describe how excited it is to watch players play at the game. one day, I thought about what I really like to do, and what I really would want to do in the future. Then I realized watching or playing sports made me happy and I want to do something related to sports. Thus I decided to study about sports in America where I can experience variety of sports. Even if I can not be an athlete, I want to study and learn about sports. Therefore, in freshman year, I am planning to enhance my English skills and develop my aptitude in sports. Then in Sophomore year, I am planning to study deeper and try to build extensive knowledge about sports. And in my Junior and Senior years, I will pay careful attention and study about professional sports. After I graduate and go back to Korea, I will make my dream come true with my specialty and techniques.

 

I believe this will be a great chance for me to learn not only the language but also the western culture. And this will help me to have a broader mind and be more creative. Therefore, I will try my best in studying, making new friends, and making unforgettable memories. I hope this could be a great journey and an excellent experience for my life.

Thank you.

 

 

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